Vision home on a phone: a shorter lede (#109)

OP OpenVibers committed 5 days ago · 829c409b77 · 1 file, +1 −1

At 390 px the hero lede ran five lines. It keeps the three examples and that every answer says what it cost, in three lines.

Changes

ddiff --git a/server/views/index.js b/server/views/index.js
iindex 990b635..54229e7 100644
---- a/server/views/index.js
++++ b/server/views/index.js
@@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ ${signedIn ? '' : '<p class="vi-fine">Reading, watching and the page check work
          room: 'vision',
          hero: {
              title: 'See it. Use it everywhere.',
--            lede: 'Point Vision at a picture and get something done: read a receipt, find your own photo by words, or get told when your camera sees a delivery. Local engines answer first, and every answer says what it cost.',
++            lede: 'Point Vision at a picture and get something done: read a receipt, find a photo by words, or hear when your camera sees a delivery. Every answer says what it cost.',
              start: { href: '/ask', label: 'Look at a picture' },
              chips: [{ label: 'Read', href: '/read' }, { label: 'Find', href: '/find' }, { label: 'Watch', href: '/watch' }, { label: 'People', href: '/people' }],
              motif: motif(),