Surf home on a phone: a three-line lede (#106)

OP OpenVibers committed 5 days ago · 9b1776232f · 1 file, +1 −1

"Three surfs in one room" repeated what the title lists. The lede keeps the three things to do (ride maps and race the clock, send an agent to surf the web, surf what is on across OpenVibe) in three lines instead of five.

Changes

ddiff --git a/server/views/index.js b/server/views/index.js
iindex 2462174..9b6cff4 100644
---- a/server/views/index.js
++++ b/server/views/index.js
@@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ function home({ feed = null } = {}) {
          room: 'surf',
          hero: {
              title: ROOM.line,
--            lede: 'Three surfs in one room. Ride Counter-Strike-style surf maps right in the browser and race the clock, let an agent surf the web for you and bring back what it found, or lean back and surf what is on across OpenVibe.',
++            lede: 'Ride surf maps in the browser and race the clock, send an agent to surf the web for you, or lean back and surf what is on across OpenVibe.',
              start: { href: '/ride', label: 'Start riding' },
              motif: runMotif(),
          },