Play home on a phone: a shorter lede (#172)

OP OpenVibers committed 5 days ago · 9893b141f6 · 1 file, +1 −1

At 390 px the hero lede ran five lines. The title already names achievements, leaderboards and cloud saves; the lede now says only what the title does not (guests play at once, and their progress follows them when they sign in): two lines.

Changes

ddiff --git a/server/http/pages.js b/server/http/pages.js
iindex 2f73355..706b613 100644
---- a/server/http/pages.js
++++ b/server/http/pages.js
@@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ function createPageRoutes(ctx) {
              eyebrow: `${SITE_NAME} · part of OpenVibe Services`,
              title: 'Achievements, leaderboards',
              accent: 'and cloud saves for every game.',
--            lede: 'The game services behind OpenVibe games: achievements players keep, weekly and all-time leaderboards, and saves that follow them from device to device. Guests play at once; their progress moves to their OpenVibe account when they sign in.',
++            lede: 'The game services behind OpenVibe games. Guests play at once, and their progress moves to their OpenVibe account when they sign in.',
              actions: me
                  // Two, so they sit side by side on a phone; the API is under "For game makers".
                  ? [{ label: 'Your achievements', href: '/me', primary: true }, { label: 'Play on OpenVibe.Games', href: 'https://openvibe.games/' }]